XXXXX, great press release!  I like the detail you gave in the final paragraph of the release about cells that was very informative and shows you know what you are stating, information wise.  I didn’t like the first paragraph as much because it seemed more generalized by saying all stakeholders need to be at the forefront.  I think more detail there would be beneficial.  Great job!

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XXXXX, great press release!  I like the detail you gave in the final paragraph of the release about cells that was very informative and shows you know what you are stating, information wise.  I didn’t like the first paragraph as much because it seemed more generalized by saying all stakeholders need to be at the forefront.  I think more detail there would be beneficial.  Great job!

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