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This?is?a?research?paper?that?is?part?of?my?thesis.?It?is?80%?well?written?and?does?not?need?much?re?writing.
However,?there?are?some?sections,?like?introduction?and?methodology?that?are?not?properly?written.?The?research
itself?is?based?on?two?case?studies?(data?consists?of?qualitative?interviews?with?community?activists?from
Bangladeshi?and?Caribbean?background?from?2?UK?locations).?Analysis?is?based?on?content?analysis?with?a
support?of?exploratory?semantic?network?analysis?with?Leximancer.?The?paper?content?itself?is?about?15,000
words?(+?10,000?words?quotes?from?the?interviews?that?need?to?stay?as?they?are?and?are?not?included?in?the?word
count)?In?general,?it?would?be?good?to?make?the?whole?paper?shorter?so?I?welcome?suggestions?which?parts?can
be?shorten.?

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Description
This?is?a?research?paper?that?is?part?of?my?thesis.?It?is?80%?well?written?and?does?not?need?much?re?writing.
However,?there?are?some?sections,?like?introduction?and?methodology?that?are?not?properly?written.?The?research
itself?is?based?on?two?case?studies?(data?consists?of?qualitative?interviews?with?community?activists?from
Bangladeshi?and?Caribbean?background?from?2?UK?locations).?Analysis?is?based?on?content?analysis?with?a
support?of?exploratory?semantic?network?analysis?with?Leximancer.?The?paper?content?itself?is?about?15,000
words?(+?10,000?words?quotes?from?the?interviews?that?need?to?stay?as?they?are?and?are?not?included?in?the?word
count)?In?general,?it?would?be?good?to?make?the?whole?paper?shorter?so?I?welcome?suggestions?which?parts?can
be?shorten.?

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