Submit the final draft of your literary analysis here. It must be a Word document of 900-1,100 words, properly formatted in MLA style. You must be sure to cite the novel as well as all outside sources consulted–both in the text and on the list of works cited. Remember that your paper will succeed or fail based on the amount of specific detail (including direct quotes) that you supply from the fictional work.. To that end, you must use at least 5 direct quotes from the literary work to demonstrate your thesis.
What professor said about my rough draft. Will attach draft
I am sorry, Ms. Brewer, but this approach will not do. The assignment requires that you analyze the author’s depiction of the chosen impairment; in this case, you would want to focus on the success of Sontag’s presentation of the early years of the AIDS epidemic.
You need to go back to the outline stage and PLAN an argument with thesis and topic sentences. All must be in the format that follows: In “The Way We Live Now,” Susan Sontag provides an accurate depiction of the early days of the AIDS epidemic through the eyes of those who loved one of its victims.
PLEASE FOLLOW HER INSTRUCTIONS ACCORDINGLY. I DID NOT WHICH IS WHY SHE IS GIVING ME ANOTHER CHANCE. ALSO GOING TO ATTACH MY SOURCES; READ OVER MY SOURCES AND PROVIDE IN TEXT CITATION WITHIN MY PAPER.
ATTACHED SOURCES. WHAT SHE SAID ABOUT MY FIRST SOURCE..
The first summary tells me nothing about the article. Also, your planned use of the source is unrelated to the topic of the paper. Your paper must be about the story and its depiction of something about AIDS or the AIDS epidemic.
Please try to use this source CORRECTLY into my paper. Use direct quotes from each source at least 3 from each source BUT from the story (which is what the paper should be about) “The Way We Live Now” Susan Sontag I WILL NEED AT LEAST 5 DIRECT QUOTES WITHIN THE ESSAY!!
USE ONLY THE SORUCES ATTACHED!!!! NO OUTSIDE SOURCES.